"三年前来到凶宅"这样的表述让整篇文章显得有些陈旧,我建议将"三年前"改为"三年前来到凶宅",更符合英语表达习惯。"的使用虽然常见,但可以再加一句情感化的表达,让整段文字更有感染力。
"这样的表达虽然常见,但或许可以稍作修饰,使其更符合个人风格,我可以使用"来引导转折,让读者在阅读过程中感受到故事的高潮。
"三年前来到凶宅时,主角发现自己 inadvertently discovered the evidence of a series of murders recorded in the film's胶 film."
这样不仅保持了"的表达,还让情感更加丰富。
再来看一下整个段落的逻辑性。"三年前来到凶宅"这个开头,似乎有些突兀,或许可以稍作修饰,使其更符合整体氛围,可以先描述主角来到凶宅的情景,再引出反派的发展,最后转折到吸食巨虫的情节。
"三年前来到凶宅时,主角带着妻子崔茜(JulietRylance饰)、双胞胎双亲特里夫(MichaelHallD'Addario饰)以及女儿艾丝莉(ClareFoley饰)搬入了一栋传说中的凶宅。"
"三年前来到凶宅时,主角发现自己 inadvertently discovered the evidence of a series of murders recorded in the film's胶 film."
"三年前来到凶宅时,主角发现自己 inadvertently discovered the evidence of a series of murders recorded in the film's胶 film."
"三年前来到凶宅时,主角发现自己 inadvertently discovered the evidence of a series of murders recorded in the film's胶 film."
"三年前来到凶宅时,主角发现自己 inadvertently discovered the evidence of a series of murders recorded in the film's胶 film."
"三年前来到凶宅时,主角发现自己 inadvertently discovered the evidence of a series of murders recorded in the film's胶 film."
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三年前来到凶宅时,主角发现自己 inadvertently discovered the evidence of a series of murders recorded in the film's胶 film.
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